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Storyline so far...


The thought of some very important topic missing in this forum was nailed in my brain for some time...

So, how about sharing some thoughts and feelings about the way story went so far?..



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I have to confess. This idol-worshipper type of relationship between Seya and Jade didn't make any sense to me recent events in my life. Only then I discovered that a patient person can cause feelings towards himself by constantly showing love and attention...
I'm really shocked by the way you saw it through way before me, Sheena-chan. Honestly. Taking off my hat...

Love this comic. In my humble opinion the only thing it really lacks is a little more motion. I mean wouldn't it be fun if the surrounding world would try to achieve Seya for it's own business? Or some consequences of anomalies caused by her shift in time would show and attack her? Or at least Jade's relatives would show up..)

Just a wild idea...

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I'm glad that you like the storyline so far :)

Okay, I agree that the storyline could use a bit more motion and action and such, but this is only the begining, I assure you that there will be more action and character development that will be going on very soon ^^ Just be patient and I'm sure what I have in store will fulfill everybody's needs :)

~Sheena-chan

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I think that the way you've not rushed into things [most webcomics would probably be at the full-on girlfriends stage by now, I'd imagine] has actually worked in your favour. It adds to the tension, and builds suspense. Definitely one of the better-structured webcomics out there, if you ask me.

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Wow ^^ thanks Fiyenyaa, that's very sweet :)

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